Deluoode: The Visual Novel

[rileymross]

This is a drawing of Del-chan's room at night. Technically scanned a little pale.



Based on 320 height it would look like this... I could potentially mix the colors more properly, but I think the blue tone.

[Gotz]

Calling it now: the bro is either a true nerd or a macho type dude like Kamina.
But one thing I'm sure of is that bro is a full-blown degenerate lolicon. That way, we can have the true Otaking! The embodiment of Deluoode!

I actually like the story of Del searching for her older brother. You don't see that type of story very often, and it's certainly a first in Science Adventure. Like I said, I was 1000% sure this was going to be a gem.

Hey now, nothing’s written yet. This cold still be coal. Sorry for the spam posting but I want to get my ideas down while I have them.

I had an idea about org-tan. I was trying to think of how to fit her in to the story. My thought is this: make her work for us.

Org-tan works for the powers that be in Deluoode city. In the course of following a lead on her brother, del-Chan runs into org tan but it’s completely by accident. Then later on in the story org-tan starts showing Jo around del-Chan all the time, sometimes in a disguise and sometimes not. Del-Chan notices and becomes increasingly paranoid and starts to think that someone really is pursuing her.

Org-tan would’ve been assigned to keep an eye on del-Chan as The Forum (the name of our epic shadow government, subject to change) has taken notice of her activities and fears she may fall into the hands of enemy agents from the committee (alternative name lending) who have infiltrated deluoode city.

This would culminate in del-Chan fleeing org-tan in a big chase, with her running into some friendly police officers that promise to protect her. But they’re actually committee men! And so del-Chan gets abducted and has to be rescued by org-tan. Following that, del-Chan is introduced to The Forum, and is surprised to see so many familiar faces among its members. In true anime fashion, the forum brings aboard a moe anime girl with no particularly outstanding skills aside from being a keyboard warrior. This is how org-tan and del-Chan become friends and partners (police way not gay way, unless…).

This is just a vague outline. Doesn’t have to be as hammy as this but this is what I have for now. Lmk what you think

Definitely needs to be polish, but enemies to friends trope always goes hard. Guess this is canon now.

Gun and /k/ bros, what weapons do feddies use? I was going to use the old reliable SOCOM, but I wanna hear your thoughts.

Feds with H&K guns are always a cool look. But the MP7, MP5, MP9 or P90 is something that works really well for that. Something compact and can be concealed. Briefcase guns exist too, like the MP5K briefcase.
If its a pistol, then Glocks (the 17 / 19) and SIG P229s work too.

[Blond]

Hey now, nothing’s written yet. This cold still be coal. Sorry for the spam posting but I want to get my ideas down while I have them.

I had an idea about org-tan. I was trying to think of how to fit her in to the story. My thought is this: make her work for us.

Org-tan works for the powers that be in Deluoode city. In the course of following a lead on her brother, del-Chan runs into org tan but it’s completely by accident. Then later on in the story org-tan starts showing Jo around del-Chan all the time, sometimes in a disguise and sometimes not. Del-Chan notices and becomes increasingly paranoid and starts to think that someone really is pursuing her.

Org-tan would’ve been assigned to keep an eye on del-Chan as The Forum (the name of our epic shadow government, subject to change) has taken notice of her activities and fears she may fall into the hands of enemy agents from the committee (alternative name lending) who have infiltrated deluoode city.

This would culminate in del-Chan fleeing org-tan in a big chase, with her running into some friendly police officers that promise to protect her. But they’re actually committee men! And so del-Chan gets abducted and has to be rescued by org-tan. Following that, del-Chan is introduced to The Forum, and is surprised to see so many familiar faces among its members. In true anime fashion, the forum brings aboard a moe anime girl with no particularly outstanding skills aside from being a keyboard warrior. This is how org-tan and del-Chan become friends and partners (police way not gay way, unless…).

This is just a vague outline. Doesn’t have to be as hammy as this but this is what I have for now. Lmk what you think

Definitely needs to be polish, but enemies to friends trope always goes hard. Guess this is canon now.

Gun and /k/ bros, what weapons do feddies use? I was going to use the old reliable SOCOM, but I wanna hear your thoughts.

Feds with H&K guns are always a cool look. But the MP7, MP5, MP9 or P90 is something that works really well for that. Something compact and can be concealed. Briefcase guns exist too, like the MP5K briefcase.
If its a pistol, then Glocks (the 17 / 19) and SIG P229s work too.

I'm learning so much about weapons I can finally get my visa and hop on those sweet, sweet, American NEET bucks.
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